lexieells

i liked it(: even if it was just for a laugh i though it was very composed. if you took it seriously, I think you could write a true worthy ...

my only big issue when reading it, as far as the wording, I dont like how you say "nice" twice in the second line of the chours. I'd change that ...

I liked that you were willing to express something so personal. That in itself says a lot about a poet. In regards to this sepcific poem, I think that it ...

I felt that this is quite a powerful piece. It demonstrates emoition and deals with something that a little of lovely ladies deal with when they are younger and even ...

I too love this. It is writte beautifully. I understand how youre feeling...I know you dont want to hear that or dont think its true..but trust me, Ive been there. ...

I really did enjoy this. I found it slightly confusing toward the beginning when you talked about his "only having eys for Garret". I wasnt sure exactly what you meant. ...

this in geniunely exceptional. I couldnt have phrased a situation such as this more beautifully. you are extremely talented. I love all of your work and I truthfully believe that ...

This was genious. Brilliant. It showed such an amazing perspective. I believe that the meaning could be transformed to fit most peoples idea and thoughs. For example, for myself, I ...

Your revised rhyming is a bit better. I, however, as it appears you do, perfer to write poetry without rhymes. I feel they portray the message just as weel. You ...

My favorite book(s) would have to be the Harry Potter series. As childish as it may seem, my love is not only for the story but the beautiul way J.K. ...

i liked the overall theme of the poem. Although, it all seemed too forced. it didnt flow very well. it seemed more like you were trying to make it rhyme ...