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Thanks, Lauren! I'm going to release a full version of the book after I've revised all the chapters. It should answer most of your questions.

Sooooooo glad you like the city! We're in Caer Ebon now, right? I hope you read the rest of the book. I haven't posted all the chapters yet, but there's ...

So glad you liked it! This is actually set in a parallel medieval world with the regions using their older names. Aragon is a place between France and Spain and ...

I named him Tobacco because of Hans Swordfish, which was meant to be a play on Han Solo from Star Wars. Their ship also. Perhaps I ought to change that.

Sorry about all the barf words. Merpeople use them for curses because that's how they use the bathroom. I'm so glad you like my names!

Thanks, Shady! Sorry about Colin. It was originally Corwin's name and I'm still trying to get all the Colins out.

Thanks, Shady! Yes, this is a remake of The Little Mermaid. It occurred to me that no one retells fairy tales without changing them, so that's what I do. I ...

Oops, sorry about the gypsies. I was thinking of Romania. I should have remembered about India. Thanks!

Yay! I mean, not to complain about most people not being Christian just because the scientific theory of evolution is presented as proven truth even though it's not proven which ...

How come you said nothing the first few times?

Brilliant. This really works in ways my songs seem to not. Very cool. I just realized all my good descriptive words seem boring. Anyway, I like your song.

Loved this. Question: The last line made me wonder if you're actually a Christian because I am too and it seems like a non-believer wouldn't write that line.

Nicely written, but I have a small question. Why is this labeled as romantic? I can't find romance anywhere in here. Maybe you clicked the wrong button?

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Love your avatar, Lizz...hahaha...