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Wow, I really enjoyed reading your poem!! It's amazing and I loved the way you wrote it!!!

Wow, this poem was really simple, but deep. And I really loved your imagery, you did a VERY good job writing this poem!!!

I love part 2!!! Its the best, I can actually feel the emotions!! Good job!!

Wow, I think this is going to be my favorite poem of yours!!!

Wow, I really loved reading this!! My favorite chapter yet, I think, I don't know. Anyway, i really hope that you continue writing, especially this series!!!

Wow, I really enjoyed reading your poem!! It really asks a lot of meaningful questions that need answers, I feel strongly about this subject, too, even though I was very ...

This poem is amazing!!! It would make a GREAT song!!!

Wow, you write really good!! This poem just makes me feel what you must have felt while you were writing it!! Great imagery, by the way!!!! Keep writing!!!

I love this poem!!! Its very, very, good!! I love the way you describe an action after every word!! Nice reading this!!

Your poem is very beautiful!! I loved reading it, its very poetic. No nitpicks, because I really couldn't find any, except for some capitalization at the first parts of your ...

I loved reading this whole poem!! Your poem was amazing, I really loved your imagery, and the way you spaced out the words. I made me capture that persons feelings!! ...

This has to be my favorite poem of yours!! I really really loved reading it!! I couldn't see any errors, to my eye. But I really enjoyed reading it!!

This was awesome!! I loved reading it!!! I liked it because you had so much stuff to do with it, so much passion. I could feel his hurt, and how ...

I loved reading your poem!! It was short, but it had awesome imagery!!

This is beautiful, it's like taking on a lifetime of quotes in one breath, you know. It's just eye widening and beautiful. Keep writing!! There's not much to nitpick,so I'll ...