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Their were no mishaps that I could detect. Al in all, I loved every letter of this. No bluff. I found myself drawn to the screen with every entry. Though ...

I like this, the only thing that I have to say about it is that it needs a little bit more imagery. Parts of it seemed a little dry, and ...

I think that the overall paper was good, there were some very interesting facts that I never knew. On the other hand I think that you should try to be ...

I wasn't expecting her to die. Everything that I noticed was already pointed out. The imagery was very good, romantic and I loved the sadness of the poem. Very good.!!!It ...

The things that I noticed have already been pointed out. I really like the way you play with words, very creative. I can't quote and paste or whatever to show ...

Everything Vee said explained it all. The poem had epic imagery, and beautiful rhythm. I loved it, the best thing I've reviewed since my own poems, really I am having ...

I really liked this poem, I've never seen the first version, but I like this one. I like the moral and the way you presented the poem. I can't pick ...

I really like this poem, it is a message many teens try to get out today, including me!!. Nice job on the rhyming and I really like these lines!!: You ...

I really like this, really. It has a nice rhyme and feel to it, great job on writing this piece!!! I love these lines: To bask in the heat of ...

This poem is really good, and sad, but good. I think that your poem has very, very good imagery and I love the first few lines, simply amazing. I could ...

I love this it is very beautiful and loving and you can tell that the people in this story love each other. I think you took a lot of time ...

This was really good for it being your first time. The idea of the poem is really original, I don't know how you thought of it. I think that the ...

I really like this poem, its very clean and cut if and well written. I love the way you rhyme in the different lines, very beautiful and poetic, and its ...

I really really really like this poem because it was full of fine imagery!!!! I love these lines: Faces of beauty but souls made of ice, they have eyes that ...

I love this poem, to me it is more of a story than a poem.. I think that you should add more feeling and emotion to this poem, it has ...