I really like this, really. It has a nice rhyme and feel to it, great job on writing this piece!!! I love these lines:
To bask in the heat of the sun and yearn
To keep this freedom, the sky and the sea
A beam will shine, of one bright light
And finally bring peace to every night.
These lines are the ones that stand out to me and I really love the way you wrote it. Great job!!!!
Points: 1245
Reviews: 142
Donate