legendarycomputerpoetry

Hello! (Happy birthday too!) I'm a sucker for repetition so when you repeated "life has more flavor/life is better with flavor" I immediately dropped a like! This poem is short ...

Hi, I like this poem a bunch! The only thing I have complaints about is the structure of the poem. Journeys aren't linear so I would expect the stanzas to ...

Hi luminescence, maybe we aren't alone anymore, nestled into newborn saturninity or we're just too lonely to realize the puzzle pieces aren't in the right places." In my opinion, BEST ...

Hi ShadowVyper, Did you...did you just personify anxiety? Because you did it so well! I think making this poem into a graphic with such a chaotic background perfectly captures what ...

Hi AceassinOfTheMoon, I really enjoyed this poem. Not only because I relate to it, but because the structure makes reading--as far as understanding the message--easier. As I mentioned before, I ...

This is big sad... Best line is how many eldest daughters have leaned against the bathroom wall to become stable because school never taught them how to navigate the independence ...

Not quite sure how I was supposed to drink tea, I took a large swig from my cup – and immediately burned my mouth. (me too...) Honestly the fact that ...

I'm finally caught up to read this! My favorite character so far is Temp (what a savage name "Temporary" imagine if someone named their kid that) because they are so ...

MirrorOfTheSun, At first, I thought this poem might be about OCD (i.e. hand washing) and how it can make even the simple acts in life almost addicting. But once I ...

Yoshikrab, I like this poem! The stylistic choice of its format reminds me of a waterfall, flowing down until reaching the very bottom--and then going even farther down the connecting ...

MirrorOfTheSun, I like this poem! Though simple, I can understand your feelings in all their complexities. My only note is that repetition in poems is fine, but sometimes too much ...

brotherGeo, I never knew Mickey Mouse could be so philosophical! This characterization of him is so interesting and I think you captured what perspective means in a way that is ...