lauraxc

This is a great piece of work. Its vivid and violent (and lets face it, who deosn't like violent?) Its a great idea and you've done really well at personifying ...

Very brave person to write a story about abuse, its obviously a very taboo subject, but you have done it tastefully and (cant think of the word! basically youre not ...

To be honest with you I just think its beautiful, there's something slightly off with the flow on one of the stanzas but I can't put my finger on it, ...

This is good, and really effective. I like the general rhythm of the poem and the use of repetition. The imagery is excellent and continuous. It flows really well. I ...

My sisters keeper, P.S. I love you, the notebook ... they're all good films, but all 3 changed the book plot drastically (2 changed the ending, one changed the place ...

I love this xD i really do, it made me laugh at the end, but i really liked it! It was emotional all the way through, I was expecting a ...

Theres not much to say other than i really really like this. The imagery and the continued theme of wildlife, i dont know it just makes you feel peaceful and ...

I like the emotion you're trying to create, the first part of the poem shows peace very well, and some of the metaphors etc that you use are very effective, ...

I really liked the imagery associated with this poem, the repeated use of the butterflies helped to make the 'love' emotion seem constant and light. i also loved when you ...

i loved the beginning of this poem, the rhyme works very well. overall, all i can say is that the poem was amazing and set out very well. its very ...

This is a really beautiful emotional piece, it's short without being incomplete, you covered all the points you needed to make perfectly. I like the snow as well, it creates ...

I really like this! It's light hearted and at the same time conveys emotion with some of the lines you use. As silly as it sounds, 'personifying' the inspiration brought ...

I really liked it, i think the dashes helped me understand the rhythm of the song and the way you wanted it to go. It has lyrics that a lot ...

This is a nice, emotional piece. The loneliness aspect is portrayed really well, along with a sense of self-disbelief. I also liked the aspect of the tears turning from tears ...

I like this, I like the links that you make to humans and ants. I like how you're exploring the links between them both and giving the ants human characteristics. ...