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Re: William tells Henry about his odd dream
this is such a fun read and i love the absurdity here. to william checking if there were actually marks, his complete euphoria that just consumes him when talking about ...
Mar 18 -
Re: "The Rarest Color" Chapter 2: Close Enough to Cut
☘ 1st Leaf: First Impressions & Initial Thoughts hello there!! while i did unfortunately discover this late, i am a bit invested and am curious will things will go. throughout ...
Mar 18 -
Re: Names
hellooo! this poem is quite an interesting one! in general, it's still, calm, but describes melancholy throughout itself. it's just "what it is." rather than prioritizing direct rhymes or sing-songy ...
Feb 21 -
Re: waterfall
hello there!! as hinted by the bio, there are the themes around to "absorb" information, which are portrayed lovely with this overall metaphor by the usage of water. this allegory ...
Feb 14 -
Re: Apparent are your sins quatrain
hello!! this poem is quite beautiful. the flow of the lines are structured formal, but still reads like a private, prayer that's intimate. each line is so visceral, that they're ...
Jan 29 -
Re: To the queen of hearts
hello!! i wanna say, this drawing is lovely! the detail especially at the heart is great and eye-catching (and the simplified accurate heart there is impressive, knowing how difficult it ...
Jan 26 -
Re: Little Boy Blue
hello there!! while at its core the story does burrow concepts and ideas more associated with children stories, it uses them to write an engaging story with some complexity that ...
Jan 26 -
Re: Don't yell - a poem by Juno
hello!! to start off, i hope that you are well! now, i just have to say this is a great piece that i keep coming to, and i am so ...
Jan 26 -
Re: What Men See
hello!!! reading this poetry makes you confront the reality of patriarchal conditioning that is cruel to the humanity of women, which is always commentary meaningful and true to many experiences ...
Jan 25 -
Re: I'm Uhhh New To This!
On its own the poem is such a lovely poem, then the added context in the bio makes this even sweeter! This poem spills out so much about the speaker's ...
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Re: PRICE OF BLOOD part one
Helloooo!! This is such a compelling story, with details written in a way that is very engaging to read! Overall, many of the descriptions here are greatly written. It really ...
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Re: The Bunny Poem
Aughh your poetry is so, so interesting and great! There's this kind of "feral" quality to all the poems I've read so far that makes your writing style stand out ...
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Re: Gray Box
Hello!! This is quite an interesting concept! It manages to be a simple one while also being very complicated! Alongside that, the protagonist, Kanari, as a character brings interest due ...
Sep 28, 2025 -
Re: TIME. : chapters 4-6
Hello again!! I can't believe I didn't catch up on these recent chapters any sooner! Also, don't worry about taking too long to publish—your life outside of this platform matters ...
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Re: twigs, twigs
Gosh, what a great poem!! This poem is just so, so raw!! There is so much depth to this, so much deep emotions that are expressed—and its all written here ...
Sep 27, 2025
