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  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: William tells Henry about his odd dream

    this is such a fun read and i love the absurdity here. to william checking if there were actually marks, his complete euphoria that just consumes him when talking about ...

    Mar 18
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: "The Rarest Color" Chapter 2: Close Enough to Cut

    ☘ 1st Leaf: First Impressions & Initial Thoughts hello there!! while i did unfortunately discover this late, i am a bit invested and am curious will things will go. throughout ...

    Mar 18
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Names

    hellooo! this poem is quite an interesting one! in general, it's still, calm, but describes melancholy throughout itself. it's just "what it is." rather than prioritizing direct rhymes or sing-songy ...

    Feb 21
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: waterfall

    hello there!! as hinted by the bio, there are the themes around to "absorb" information, which are portrayed lovely with this overall metaphor by the usage of water. this allegory ...

    Feb 14
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ​Apparent are your sins quatrain

    hello!! this poem is quite beautiful. the flow of the lines are structured formal, but still reads like a private, prayer that's intimate. each line is so visceral, that they're ...

    Jan 29
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: To the queen of hearts

    hello!! i wanna say, this drawing is lovely! the detail especially at the heart is great and eye-catching (and the simplified accurate heart there is impressive, knowing how difficult it ...

    Jan 26
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Little Boy Blue

    hello there!! while at its core the story does burrow concepts and ideas more associated with children stories, it uses them to write an engaging story with some complexity that ...

    Jan 26
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Don't yell - a poem by Juno

    hello!! to start off, i hope that you are well! now, i just have to say this is a great piece that i keep coming to, and i am so ...

    Jan 26
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: What Men See

    hello!!! reading this poetry makes you confront the reality of patriarchal conditioning that is cruel to the humanity of women, which is always commentary meaningful and true to many experiences ...

    Jan 25
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: I'm Uhhh New To This!

    On its own the poem is such a lovely poem, then the added context in the bio makes this even sweeter! This poem spills out so much about the speaker's ...

    Nov 10, 2025
  • Short Story » General, General Re: PRICE OF BLOOD part one

    Helloooo!! This is such a compelling story, with details written in a way that is very engaging to read! Overall, many of the descriptions here are greatly written. It really ...

    Sep 30, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Bunny Poem

    Aughh your poetry is so, so interesting and great! There's this kind of "feral" quality to all the poems I've read so far that makes your writing style stand out ...

    Sep 28, 2025
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Gray Box

    Hello!! This is quite an interesting concept! It manages to be a simple one while also being very complicated! Alongside that, the protagonist, Kanari, as a character brings interest due ...

    Sep 28, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: TIME. : chapters 4-6

    Hello again!! I can't believe I didn't catch up on these recent chapters any sooner! Also, don't worry about taking too long to publish—your life outside of this platform matters ...

    Sep 28, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: twigs, twigs

    Gosh, what a great poem!! This poem is just so, so raw!! There is so much depth to this, so much deep emotions that are expressed—and its all written here ...

    Sep 27, 2025


You flare, you flicker, you fade... And in the end, all your tomorrows become yesterdays.
— Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)