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Hi, I know i shouldn't reply if i have not read the whole story, but it is a tad bit boring. i have tried to read it 3 times already. ...

Hi, I'm reviewing this again because when I read something I generally try to review it because it irritates me so much when someone reads something belong to me and ...

Hi, This poem was a cute little read. I liked the repetition in it! I didn't really understand this part though: "You're old and boring, you don't understand me!" I've ...

Hi, I thought this poem was really cute and sweet. It seemed a bit short to me though. I think that you could make it longer, just have that be ...

Hi, Well, this is a good piece, but not for a beginning. I have no idea who these people are. I can't say much, because this is how I posted ...

Hi, When I first started reading your story, I loved it! I love whole teacher, student thing. I live for books like that. It started to scare me a bit ...

I like this piece, the story line of it. I think you should make it more personal though, yes, that is the type of thing she would write in her ...

Hi, Again, excellent with the plot for the story, but remember to run through your spell check :wink: The story was alright, it seemed like you were in a rush ...

Wow, I never read a story about two gay guys before. I think when two guys are in-love it's totally sweet. I really did and truly like this story. One ...

Hey, Again, excellent job on this piece. I did notice something but it's not that big and i'm not even sure if you need to change it. I sigh, pick ...

Hey, Good work on this piece. These are the kinds of stories that i like reading. I have only read the first chapter but i'm going to read the other ...

Wow! That was amazing, never, well in a long, time have i looked at something and wished that i have written. Though, i don't know if i could write a ...

What the other people said are right, please double space your work or people will not want to read it. I didn't really want to finish it because of it ...

Hey, I thought this story was funny, it was really cool, how you still used some of the things from the fairy tale. All the spelling mistakes (I know it ...

This essay did not at all persuade me. If the school started later it would not give people and extra hour of sleep because most people would just stay up ...