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Re: These Things Happen
BOOM *appears in a dramatic flare of smoke* Ok, I don't have much context, so the beginning of the story was kinda confusing. But I think I kinda sorta understand ...
Jan 10, 2015 -
Re: An Apology Letter
BOOM *Appears in a dramatic flash of smoke* I hope that whoever this poem was dedicated to gets to read it, because wow! If I were them, I'd say apology ...
Jan 10, 2015 -
Re: I Need Help
BOOM *appears in a dramatic flash of smoke* Just so you know, I'm not reviewing this as a work. I'm just giving this a review to get it out of ...
Jan 10, 2015 -
Re: Outlier Love
BOOM! *appears in a dramatic explosion of smoke* That was touching! And quite relatable too. Not everyone has an "outlier lover" in their lives (or don't yet) but there are ...
Jan 9, 2015 -
Re: A Not-So-True Story of a Man Called Earl Higgins
So let me get this straight- Marie has been dead (killed by Earl) and Earl has been just coddling her dead body and stuff? Eww. If so, great job making ...
Jan 8, 2015 -
Re: When A Loved One Passes (First Post)
A lot of people would say something about this being relatable, and for many others I'm sure it is. I will freely admit that I have been lucky enough not ...
Jan 8, 2015 -
Re: Synesthesia
Well I've never heard of this thing before but now that I have I think you've done a wonderful job explaining it! The poem is very descriptive and, well, poetic! ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: Kalu
BOOM *appears in a dramatic smoke bomb* Ladcat here to review! I love the style, the poetry, the emotion! I am moved to tears, literally moved to tears. }:,) Your ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Edge
BOOM *appears in a dramatic smoke bomb* Ladcat here to review... I like the principle and the idea you have here, but it's A) very short, B) The thoughts aren't ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Paradisiac doom
BOOM! *appears in a puff of smoke* Laddy here to review... Wow. I love it. I just... love it. I can't say what it is or why, but it strikes ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: My dear Icarus.
BOOM! *appears in a puff of smoke* Laddy here to review... Like always, your poetry has wowed me! What I really appreciate about this particular poem is all the motherly ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Early Morning
BOOM! *appears in a puff of smoke* Laddy here to review... I love the raw passion and you managed to imbue into so few words as this. There's a lot ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Cole's Legacy --- Chapter 3
(Dude I really can't NOT laugh when I read your username... You're driving me crazy!) Anyways... I read the word Viso and I immediately pictured Tyler. Is that an accurate ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: dreams of my memories gone by
SO. Welcome to YWS! I hope you love it here, I know I do! If you have any questions, you can ask an admin, or me... or anybody, really. I ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: The World According To Mitchell
BOOM *appears in a dramatic smoke bomb*. I am here... to review. So this is me right now- Ahahahahahaha! I can just imagine a polar bear standing up and looking ...
Mar 5, 2014
