kryptonianmenace

The formatting was a little distracting to me, but I liked it! I especially liked how the last line had both regular and italics after having the pattern for so ...

I love this! But as the historians dipped their quills in ink, and the women spun the tales that would soon become fact, a bit of dust landed on the ...

The title piqued my interest so I just had to read it! I think it's interesting that the rhyme scheme is slightly uneven, because it shows that time has passed ...

My favorite part of this is probably I'm so dumb / But I know everything because I can relate a lot. I took this poem to be about being smart ...

This is very good! My only suggestions would be to 1. expand on why you chose University of Iowa's program in particular (and more than just "It's closest to me" ...

I'm curious about why you chose to punctuate the way you did, with periods every four lines. It's also interesting to me that the last line doesn't have punctuation. I ...

I really, really love the ending of this - mostly because I realized there are multiple ways you can interpret it. My initial thought was "Is she saying that god ...

I really love this! The descriptions are so distinct, especially my eyes glisten like two emeralds, / affixed to pearls and pinned with onyx. I think it's interesting that crying ...

I love the image, but the font was a little hard to read on it. I'm curious about why you chose the images in the overall picture that you did, ...

This is a very melancholy piece, and very well written! The introspective look inside is captivating and leaves you wanting to know more. You can see the hurt that the ...

It's not often that poems leave me wanting the context, but this one definitely did! I can tell there's a story behind it, but it's vague enough to leave you ...

This is an incredibly relatable tale. First love can be heartbreaking. Based on the description of the poem, I expected a bit more references to religion, but I was pleasantly ...

I think it's interesting how this can be interpreted as self-harm because there are many people who would shirk the blame for things they've done and insist any harm they've ...

This is a heavy subject, but very poignant, in my opinion. I'm glad you recorded it because it was nice to hear how it's meant to be read! The flow ...

I first read it without the audio, and then listened to the audio after I read it, and I really love how it flows. I have a tendency to read ...