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I like how this is going, the characters were introduced very well however there is no real meat in this chapter. Each chapter is supposed to be like a small ...

In all honesty this had come a very long way since you first came to me for help. All of the problems that were originally their have been solved. Now ...

First mistakes, then opinion. I don’t know which night it happened on. It could have been during any of the countless sleepovers we had.She would only have to be alone ...

we are your vassals, we are able to make what you wish to come true! Your wish is our command!” Calvin continued, I noticed this first off, you failed to ...

This poem is nice but also rather depressing. I like how you were able to keep it short and still get your pint across, however I feel like it could ...

I think this story as a lot of promise. However SilloriaD has a lot of good points. The story is a bit awkward at times and has some room for ...

This story is kind of weird. Although I do like the way you conveyed the message. However the horror didn't work very well, I think maybe you could try to ...

I figured that this needs to get out of the green room so I thought I would add a review as well. 12. You aren't the only person who knows ...

The first mistake I noticed was that you used the wrong pedals/petals you used bike pedals instead of flower petals. Jael simple continued chanting the fifty third verse of her ...

I really like how this story is post something but it is never said what happened. It leaves the readers guessing what happened to the town. I, myself, guess that ...

This was a very interesting story. I myself always like seeing homosexual characters in stories. It gives me hope that people are becoming more accepting. I didn't see any mistakes, ...

I really liked how something as simple as water molecules were able to break down racism and show that it is nothing. However the poem itself flowed weird. I think ...

I liked this story. It showed the depression people go through when they contemplate suicide. However the time where the characters actually tried to kill themselves was sort of rushed. ...

I also liked the description in the story. However I think there could be more detail in describing the kill and maybe more description about the grid. It looks like ...

I like how this is a biblical apocalypse instead of nuclear or zombie. I myself like seeing religious works and how people interpret them. The thing about the other uncalled ...