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Hi! Krizshel here for a review :) I am one of those people who wrote about technology, and let me tell you that this essay is awesome! I love how ...

Hi! I'm Krizshel and I'll be reviewing your work. I'm not good at reviewing but I hope I can help! First of all, you did a great job with your ...

Hi! :) Just a few comments on your wonderful story. I loved the flow of events and how the scenes turned out. You also did great at describing each person ...

You made a good point and used good words. That's great! You have a clear way of expressing your ideas. It's good that you developed it with your citations. Some ...

You had a good point, but I agree with the other reviewer that you have grammatical errors in your essay. But then aside from that, your work is easy to ...

Your essay is great. It has a smooth flow of ideas and you presented each of your points well. You also have a very good word choice. Also, your essay ...

You have good ideas on your essay. But then, let me point out some that you can consider revising/editing. In the first paragraph: our day today living." I believe you ...

You have very interesting ideas and I can see that you did your best to put it in your essay. But still, you can consider telling your ideas in a ...

Nice essay you got here! I just noticed that on the second paragraph, the second sentence "First, the variation of devices for entertainment/enhancement," seems to be a fragment, not a ...

Nice essay! :) Here are just some comments. I just noticed the second sentence you had, "This is a line of Bill Gates from the website of great technology quotes ...

Your first sentence is a great hook. Also, you were able to deliver your ideas in your essay. I liked how you presented your researches for the second paragraph and ...

Your title is catchy. And so is your first sentence, which is also very interesting. You also have a good word choice. Your conclusion is good, but I guess you ...

You made a good point. You were able to deliver your message well. It was very comprehensible :) I just noticed that the first sentence of your last paragraph may ...

You did a good job. But I just noticed that your fourth paragraph's topic sentence just defined transportation instead of connecting it with technology. Aside from that, you made good ...

This was interesting to read. However, I was confused about what you were going to say at the first part of the essay because you seemed to state the opposite ...