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Right. This poem was OK, but there were some annoying flaws. I suggest you read this poem aloud or get someone else to read it to you. You'll find that ...

Hola my good sir. I loved your poem, I really did. Though I don't think it is to everyone's taste, which isn't a bad thing. Not everything can be. The ...

Afternoon Olyver - haha. I must say that your poem was quite a stroke of wit. It amused me to no end - I guess it must be part of ...

Afternoon my friend, well afternoon for me - who knows what it is for you... I'm going to go with twilight. Hmmm...Anyway enough of my yammering, onto the critique. Overall ...

Hello there Miss Ching, firstly may I congratulate you on a - by in large, good poem. The imagery you used was very visceral and kind of cinematic, which I ...

Good morrow friend, and welcome to our society. I hope that you enjoy your stay. I really enjoyed your poem, it has a lot of lovely and interesting imagery and ...

Awww what a lovely poem. It really was. It spoke of a sweet innocent love, that for me seems pretty remote these days haha. Much of the imagry was cliché, ...

Hello Ben, my name's Kris and I shall be your reviewer for today. ^_^ First of all, I think the message that you were trying to get across in this ...

Hola Baileyboo. You my dear, have the honour of being the first person I have critiqued on this site, for a year. So yes. :D haha Righto lets get stuck ...

Hey sweet-pea. What a lovely poem you have here, for 13 years old you certainly can write well. Alas, with all things gone and to come, there are flaws. *looks ...

H silverSUNLIGHTx , thank you by the way, for the lovely poem. I really enjoyed reading it. :D The best thing (I feel) about your poem, was it's ability to ...

Hi WarriorOfTheBrimstone. Hope you're OK :D Right, down to the task at hand. The poem was a little bit misleading for me. I really didn't have much idea that it ...

Hi Demeter. What a lovely poem you have here, I liked it a lot. I'm with Castlesinthesky on this one, your title is very witty indeed - very eye catching ...

Hey there m'love, do hope you're well and all that. Since everybody seems to have been rude enough, as to ignore your poem, I shall help you as best I ...

Ok, sweetness. The poem's opening stanza is pretty weak. It doesn't grab you, or even make much sense: Well that's not exactly true, but maybe it is. Cats are fury. ...