kratos17

I loved it and I can feel the emotion which I feel is the most important in poetry, well writing entirely. I would say because this poetry stanzas are normally ...

I love it so far, although I am a bit confused on what is going on. I do not know whether that was on purpose or not or I just ...

I was just here to review this piece and then at the first paragraph I was hooked. I was just sucking it in like a reader and not even paying ...

I feel the emotion wrecking through this person. Like it seems that it is so painful, but she/he seems to be ok. That just makes me happy when she/he is ...

I feel the pain in the story and just the overall tenseness of the poem. I don't really have anything to say grammatically wrong about it. I love the meaning ...

I love the rhyme sceme and just overall imagery. It kind of made me feel like I was reading a cheesy Dr. Suess rhyme with like dark images such as: ...

I love the drama and the time in between paragraphs. It was also kind of funny each time you describe what drugs she was on each time she came to ...

I loved it like you almost left me in tears. I could really feel the lost love and just feel the heart break and I was sucked in. I loved ...

I loved your poem. It is literally me because I always just doddle and then goes straight to the trash. I love how you said you wrote it like a ...

I loved your poem. I am not really known for writing poems, so bare with me please. I feel like more punctuation is important, so you like know when to ...

This is a great start and I enjoyed it, although it was a bit of a jump. I am so excited for future chapters and you should tag me. I ...

I feel like it was a very good first chapter. I got into it and look forward to reading more. I loved the semicolon usuage that was correctly used, but ...