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Re: Beautiful Flame
This is a beautiful. I love how you compare fire to a woman. The personification is a wonderful thing.
Thu May 26, 2011 6:55 pm -
Re: Dusk: Chapter 2
Thank you StoryWeaver13 for your corrections. I do realize that grammar is not my best suit but I am glad that you are able to help me out on that. ...
Thu May 05, 2011 4:08 am -
Re: Dusk: Chapter 1
To IcyFlame: Thank you for your feedback on this chapter and I look forward to getting more as I continue on with it. I know that you have a few ...
Sun Feb 13, 2011 2:55 am -
Re: Nothing Rhymes With Purple
It's sweet. But so true. Nothing does rhyme with purple. Like nothing rhymes with orange. Simple but powerful
Thu Feb 10, 2011 7:02 pm -
Re: Naruto - New Generation X Chapter 1
I enjoy the futuristic twist of the Naruto storyline. Hope to read more of it
Mon Jan 24, 2011 8:00 pm -
Re: Frost
This poem is short and simple but at the same time it is to the point. Imagery is well done and the stanzas are perfect for something that is this ...
Tue Dec 14, 2010 4:21 pm -
Re: Blank Page
Thank you to all who have reviewed this. When I wrote this poem it started off as an essay and slowly became a poem. This is one of the many ...
Tue Dec 14, 2010 4:14 pm -
Re: Dread the Dark
I really enjoy this poem. I especially like how you give me the imagery of the dark clouds how you compared them to black ink. I thought that that was ...
Fri Dec 10, 2010 2:07 am -
Re: Dark Flame
I love the fact that you used so much description and figurative language. This poem is something that I can relate to and I enjoyed it.
Wed Dec 08, 2010 10:16 pm -
Re: Writer's Block
Ugh, writer's block. The only thing that I hate more than sunshine and puppies...just kidding. I really like this poem because it expesses your annoyance with it because unfortunaely it ...
Wed Dec 08, 2010 4:43 pm -
Re: Moonflower
I enjoyed this poem due to the vivid imagery and the flow of the piece. I can sit and imagine this flower that seem to sit in the moonlight. Absolutely ...
Mon Dec 06, 2010 8:14 pm -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 12
Oooo I sense a problem with this new character Jimmy. Maybe some conflict with him and Tony in the future. Keep up the good work Spitfire. You've hooked me on ...
Mon Dec 06, 2010 4:36 pm -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 1
I did enjoy this and I swear that the way you wrote this made it sound like high school all over again. I love the main character Crys and I ...
Fri Nov 12, 2010 11:05 pm -
Re: Chapter 2 ~Fire and Ice~ a tale of a wolf
This chapter had me glued to the edge of m seat waiting to figure out who or what this girl is and why the main character passed out when he ...
Fri Nov 12, 2010 10:54 pm -
Re: prolouge ~Fire and Ice~ a tale of a wolf
Your prologue was very well done and it made me cry for more. It was very well laid out and now I really want to find out who this werewolf ...
Fri Nov 12, 2010 10:37 pm