kogarasumaro143

The blood of my children is smeared on my hands. Hera, divine and cruel. You will not rest until my body is frozen, grounded and gone. Until you hear my ...

A poem of greatness or what may have you. Nice, Great, Excellent and what not. Only I can say, try to check every spelling of the word for it makes ...

Gee! What a poem.. Hehehe... Great!! Open doors: shattered windows, Careless whispers fill the pillars. Here we are together, with each other thats all we need. Find yourself, take your ...

LOVE IT! Excellent Infinity: Hugging every single star in the universe in one giant grip --squeeze-- and then kissing their foreheads good morning. Hinting a single smile to the one ...

Great! Even the story is very short yet it drives me to feel good. It touches my heart, a little bit, because experience really creates an advantage in writing like ...

I like this poem yet it troubles me in the last stanza. Still it is a great poem... do more writing.. Red stains on the carpet, contrasting brilliant white, the ...

nice! keep it up. This a mobile pantoum, and I hope you like it. Wishing on stars for you. Hoping and praying because You need to stay longer. All I ...

WOw! Nice representation... Hope you will agree in some of my suggestions. A rope, A gun, poison or knife , PLEASE, observe parallelism Whatever was needed to take my life. ...

Oh my! I can sense a feeling of rejection here. Its good that I understand how you feel. HOWEVER, this poem can be more effective if you polish some words ...

=( huhuhu... What a sad little earth are you portraying man!! Still I love it,, My first-ever attempt at a string of haikus, so please tell me if I messed ...

ahahahaha!! Nice one. Whats your motivation in writing this kind of cute, little, funny poem??? ahahahaha... It really sucks my brain. However, you might need some polishes in it. Inconsistencies ...

Wow... Nice.. Even the poem of yours ended the way you want to end it, I can figure out that its not finish and you might probably add something. Overall ...

Nice.. Yet you have some lapses in your spelling. See this one: I Spy. A juvenile game of seek and find. Juvenile, yes, but then... let's play a round. Just ...

I hate to read LONG poem... Just by scanning and skimming it, i looks nice... :D 8) :) :o :shock: :wink: :mrgreen: I carry all my burdens, my omens and ...

CAn be! :?: :?: :?: Come one, come all, I'm having a ball. I roll on dry leaves and crusted chestnuts. With white, scraped arrows on black cotton streets, I'm ...