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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Knowing Gods chapter 1 (Edited)

    thanks for explaining!

    Dec 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Last Human: Chapter 5

    I have already fixed the conversation between fido and Akira. it says h was in awe a little bit by the dogs appearance, but it faded. He does live in ...

    Dec 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Last Human: Prologue

    The intended audience is for teens and young adults. The idea it is a children's story is to express irony.

    Nov 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Last Human: Prologue

    I was going to mention that candy people are naturally strong to lift such an object, even candy children to a certain degree, but i forgot.

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Last Human: Chapter 2

    no, i mean teat as in "nipple".

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Last Human: Chapter 2

    that's alright. it happens

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Last Human: Chapter 2

    you know, you keep calling Akira a "she" when he's male, right?

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Last Human: Chapter 1

    thank you

    Nov 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Humor Re: To Martha:

    oh, that makes sense.

    Nov 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Last Human: Chapter 1

    you mean Tomorrowland? or candytopia?

    Nov 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Last Human: Chapter 1

    The people of Candytopia speak english while other possible nations may speak certain languages. Also, since they're placed in Los Angeles, there might be some multilinguism depending on the individua

    Nov 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Last Human: Prologue

    for the prologue, i can say yes, per se.

    Nov 24, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Last Human: Prologue

    yeah, Danny is not the protagonist but the kid who finds the protagonist.

    Nov 24, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural Re: My Life in a Bizarre Town: Chapter 8

    It's more like a love triangle evolving into a love polygon.

    Jul 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: Volume 1: Chapter 1

    The title WAS intentional.

    Jun 28, 2016


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