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yeah, i wanted to show algeda's wild side and her obvious fetish, but it was too pornographic for this story. so, i'll just turn it into a future one shot. ...

well, he does get a companion, albeit a mechanical caninid depressive one. Also, the more Akira ventures out, the more hellish his journey will become.

when you write, you forget to look over. thanks!

unless you read the prologue and second chapter, then yes, i need to flesh out my character.

her character, i mean.

i know. i just wanted to give you a preview of it.

Every harem manga starts off with one girl for the first three to four chapters. then you get more girls. chapter six will have a dwarf girl joining in. Also, ...

what i mean is. yes, he still knows that he's in a fantasy world. he just assumed that it would have some real world elements, like physics, and curses wouldn't ...

yeah, there's a reasonw hy he touched the sword in the second chapter. he was using real world logic vs fantasy world logic.

okay. now it's clear to me. thanks! :)

Well, there are reasons. mostly involving racial relations. Since this world takes place in a medieval-esque style world, they probably either fire her severely, i.e. humiliate her then strip her ...

so, what did you think of Leni, so far?

he played a lot of MMORPG, so he panics a little in the prologue, but then quickly adjusts. Akio didn't get sucked into a game. that's just how the teleportation ...

Sorry if it seems cringeworthy. I've tend to suffer writer's block and just down whatever. For the way the girl, Keya, dressed, i had to put more detail because there ...

yeah, sorry for that. i just wanted to get that short arc over with. the next chapter is going to have better dialogue and more action, and won't be too ...