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Thank you! I'll take the cringing as a compliment.

P.S. I also love the title! Don't change that- it's perfect!

Thank you so much!! Don't worry, I will posting more soon this week. :)

Thank you so much for the review! The tip about categorizing this as science fiction is a good point, and all your advice is great. And don't worry, you'll find ...

Glad I could help. And a word of advice: when you want to give up, that means it's something worth working on. When a piece is challenging, that means your ...

Thanks for the review! I'm not Atheist by the way, but I do question if God (or whoever is up there) sees everything. I was certainly in a mood when ...

Thanks for the advice, and thank you for your review! :)

Thank you so much for your kind review! P.S. as soon as I noticed you're a Divergent fan I hit the follow button :)

Thanks you for the comment! And yeah, the last line resulted from my bad mood but I may change that eventually. It is a bit misleading, but I didn't think ...

You would think after being a member of this site for a while I would remember how to separate my stanzas. Shows how often I post poetry... Can someone be ...

I'm glad I could help! :)

Thank you so much for the review! I love reviews like this that are so honest. I want to know if things feel confusing or disconnected so I appreciate the ...

Thank you for the review! I haven't continued writing this story in a long time, which makes me feel really guilty because I feel like I've abandoned my characters ha ...

Thank you for both of your reviews. These are so helpful!!

Thank you so much! This is a very helpful review, and I will think about all of your suggestions! :)