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Kali Lennon

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Bite Me

    Thanks a lot for the review! :)

    Sat Apr 22, 2017 9:39 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Sea Grass

    Thank you so much for putting the time in to review this and my other piece, Bite Me. I really appreciate all the feedback! I knew I was taking a ...

    Fri Apr 21, 2017 2:07 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Bite Me

    Thank you so much for your advice! I suppose I was trying to be elusive. I didn't want the reader to be let in too much, much like how the ...

    Fri Apr 21, 2017 2:02 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Magnetized

    This is a super late thank you, but thanks a ton for the review! I thought I replied back but clearly didn't. I will definitely take a look at that ...

    Tue Feb 21, 2017 2:54 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Pen to Paper

    Thanks again for the feedback. Like I said I really appreciate it! I've been on a writing hiatus for the longest duration ever, so kind words and constructive feedback like ...

    Mon Jan 30, 2017 5:28 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Magnetized

    Thank you for the thoughtful and constructive critiques! I was definitely aiming for sort of a lost romance theme. I suppose I wanted to open the poem in a broad ...

    Mon Jan 30, 2017 5:26 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: What is the Point?

    Thank you for the kind review!! :) It's very appreciated.

    Mon Jan 30, 2017 5:21 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Magnetized

    Thank you!! :) I'll take note on the introduction leading into the poem too suddenly. I will fix that!

    Sun Jan 29, 2017 4:10 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Magnetized

    Thanks for the review :)

    Sun Jan 29, 2017 4:09 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Magnetized

    Thank you for the review!! :)

    Sun Jan 29, 2017 4:08 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sloping Sidewalks

    Hello. I appreciate the constructive criticism. I always take every reader's opinion into mind, because it's important to know your audience's viewpoint. Thank you for spending the time on this ...

    Sat May 14, 2016 9:03 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sloping Sidewalks

    Thank you for the review! Yes all of your inferences about my poem were correct. It's about being stuck in the same old town with the same people and also ...

    Sat May 14, 2016 9:01 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 1 (Part 1)

    Thank you for the thoughtful and helpful reviews you wrote for my story! :)

    Tue May 03, 2016 1:11 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 1.2 New Novella (Untitled)

    Thank you so much for the advice and the review!

    Tue May 03, 2016 1:08 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 1.2 New Novella (Untitled)

    Thank you so much for the advice and the review!

    Tue May 03, 2016 1:08 am


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