klennon14

Wow, this is a very intriguing story to say the least! I love it! I typically stray away from horror/scary reads, but this piece caught my eye. I like how ...

First of all, I will warn you that I am a picky reviewer. This is not because I want to put anyone down, but I want you to improve your ...

Wow, this is a very heartfelt and sweet piece. I actually suggest you incorporate the idea of the alphabet of a couple's love in a short story, or even a ...

Your rhythm and structure is spot on. From what I can tell, you never really veer from your pattern, so it's a fairly smooth read. Warning, I am a nitpicker ...

Hi, there! I'm here to review your letter if that's okay. If you weren't looking for a review at the moment, then just ignore this. You may want some input ...

The effect that you create in this poem is certainly impactful. My favorite line is "plastering confidence that settles all sears." The line is powerful and the rhythm is spot ...

Hello there, Kathryn, I am here to review this intro! I'm not sure if this a revised version or a rough copy, but either way this is an intriguing topic. ...

I love the wonderful picture that this poem paints in my mind. It is lyrical and it has everything I love about nature-inspired poems. "Basking in the warmth of the ...

Hello, there! I'm going to review your piece! Don't take my nitpicking too hard, it's just from my perspective as a reader. This is simply my opinion below, and some ...

Wow, I love this! It is very intriguing to the reader. It makes me want to keep reading to find out what led up to Sage's death or what resulted ...

Hello there! So, there are a few grammatical and spelling errors I picked up on. "He tried not to show his frustration and be understanding at about/dealing with her anxiety." ...

I agree with IronSpark below. Some of the "my"'s are okay, but too many can be distracting to the reader. I think the first passage would sound better if you ...

First and foremost, I completely agree with the message you employ in this insightful poem. The more eloquent words are not overdone, and you used them in just the right ...

We'll begin with the not so fun stuff: "...despite fact that Terri is going crazy over it." you left out "despite THE fact" "Instead, I cast my attention in Ethan's ...

Intriguing beginning with "It started with a wolf whistle." Love it! It creates a dramatic pause and builds suspense in that one line. There are a few sentences that I ...