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Hi there! Here for a quick review! I love the description you have written for this chapter. It drew me in right away. I think you should use the "bottle ...

Hi there! I really love the concept of this piece! I would also like to respectfully disagree with the reviewer below: I think this piece is definitely put together. I ...

Hi, here for a review! Wow, first of all, I love the tone of this piece. You jab the reader right in the heart and it gives off such an ...

Hi there, here for a review! First things first, you use "ur" as in "your" at one point. Please don't use texting language on here. You were probably in the ...

Hi there! I'm here for a review. :) Disclaimer: I can get nitpicky, but you may choose to do as you please with my suggestions/opinions. Overall, this is a good ...

Hi there, here for a review! Disclaimer: I can get nitpicky. Don't take it personally, it's just my reviewing style. You can do as your heart desires with my opinions. ...

Hi there! Here for a review. First of all, I like the mysterious, almost eerie feeling in the opening. I haven't read any of the other chapters, but you are ...

Hi, here for a review! I don't always enjoy third person POV, but you do a splendid job of conveying emotions through what's going on in your characters heads. I ...

Hi, here for a review! Wow! There's a sort of valiant feel to the opening paragraph that I really like. Nice flow. There's a particular diction that you write with ...

Hi there, here for a review! Overall, this is a great story. Your descriptions and characters are good, but I do think we need a little tweaking here and there. ...

Hi, here for a review. :) Wow! There's a kind of gripping quality in the way you write that really stands out. I love this poem! "and swells of masala ...

Hi there! I haven't read the other chapters in this story, but it's well-written and engaging! We'll get the few nitpicks I have out of the way, which are simply ...

Hi there! I really love this! It's a cute, fun piece- a very refreshing read. You are a clever writer and I like the bantering between the husband and wife. ...

From the first line you had me. Hi there, here for a quick review! :) Dude, are you me and I am you? The entire first paragraph perfectly describes me. ...

Hi there, ChocolateCello! Here for a review. :) Disclaimer: sometimes I can get nitpicky, as you probably know, so please do as you wish with my incessant rambling. When I ...