kittykat

This... was... amazing... *wipes away tear and runs to read the others* I can't believe I didn't read this earlier! I don't know what else to say other than it ...

Wow, this was really good! I'm not actually sure how to crit this though. The best part was definately the last. sorry it's such a short crit! - kittykat

Um... What was this for? Is this supposed to be a poem? I didn't get it...

I love the books, but I have to admit this was funny! You got to make another one of these!

lol. I liked it. Why is there only a few people that get it? I don't want to explain it or else it might take some of the funny away... ...

Wow... this was... the best thing I've ever seen. This is actually the first time I've been in the Scripts forum. I have to come here more often! I'm so ...

There will be some conflict when I post the second part. I just wanted to start it off with this one so I can get on with the story that ...

And you said this was a like a new country to you? This was brilliant! You should really keep writing poems! *applause* -kittykat

I can't find the second book... :cry: The first was sooo good!

*bursts out in laughter* this is awesome... :D

When I read over this poem the second time a weird feeling was in my stomach. I didn't find anything wrong with it. Anyway!... It was a very good poem!

This was so cute! Aww... poor little kitty got shot! Run kitty! Bad man threw her on the dumpster! Oh no! Hurry! Get the vet to help the kitty! *runs ...

so late to critique your poems I am... but my response is the same, so far. excellent poetry Seraph! I didn't find any grammer mistakes, but I do agree with ...

very good Seraph! I wish I read this earlier, but I never saw it... :D

hehehe..funny... Snoink got married! Why wasn't I invited to the wedding??