kittycursed

Hi! another great work! I'm Charlie, and I'm here to review your work again. I just finished reviewing chapter five, and decided to come see chapter four. this is another ...

Hey! great work! I'm Charlie, here to review it for you! Firstly, this work sounds very professionally written, have you been taking classes? or do you do a lot of ...

Hi! Great work! firstly, I like the talk of pigeons! not many people spend time to focus on them. I also like the use of an ampersand in the last ...

Hiya, great work! Welcome to YWS aswell! Firstly, "The room is ample, bigger than my room at least, where there is space enough for my bed and wardrobe if squeezed ...

Hi! Great work! Welcome to YWS aswell! Firstly, one thing that stuck out to me is the paragraphs. while most are a great length, some are a little long. Personally, ...

Hiya! Great work! Firstly, a summary. Raisa is forced to go to an enemies house. her enemy, Cheryl, pulls her hair in class. Raisa complained about her, and now her ...

Heya! Great work once again! firstly, a quick summary, Sam looks through his house, trying to find evidence to get his parents to leave the house with him. He finds ...

Hiya! another great work, and I'm glad to see this story continue! firstly, NOO, our narrator has fallen to the dark side, serving Mariah Carey, all of their earlier resentment ...

Heya! Another great work! The suspense is strong, and the stakes are high. The narrator is being chased down by Mariah Carey, and we don't know if they'll be able ...

Hi! Great work! I really enjoyed reading this one. I never see much writing about SCPs on this site, and I find such interest in them, so it's nice to ...

Hi! great work! aw, absinthe has a sweet moment with a stranger out in town. She helps a little boy pay for the doll he wants but can't afford. I ...

Hi! Great work! firstly, I like the words you find at the end of sentences! not only do they rhyme, something not seen as often in poems nowadays, they're all ...

Oh gosh.. not.. Mariah Carey! Great work! this not only does well as a horror, but it's also mysterious! We have no idea who the narrator is, or why Mariah ...

Hi! Great work! firstly, I like the way you describe and format your story, almost like old folklore, like something that your grandpa would tell you because his grandpa told ...

Hi! Great work! first of all, I love the concept! I also like the mentions of low oxygen, dim lights, silence, and rage, as they're very relatable. one thing I ...