*This fanfic is underneath my folder titled “Mariah Carey lurks…”. Gacha Club character designs are under this forum: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=116005&start=1020. I wasn’t really planning on continuing the other Mariah Carey fanfic but I decided to anyway. Idk if I will continue this, but I’ll see. Regardless, I hope that you enjoy this and Scary Creepmas!*
It’s December 22nd, 2025 and I am still running throughout the snowy woods, throwing Halloween decorations at Mariah Carey. Sometimes I’m in a Christmas department store. Other times I’m at some nameless family’s Christmas party. But I always get teleported back to the woods.
I hear Mariah’s voice weakening, but she is still pursuing me. I do not know where the exit is or if there is an exit. My supply of Halloween decorations is running low. I don’t know how much longer I can fight her off.
Hopefully she’ll be down soon. My legs can only run so far.
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I hope you had a good Creepmas!! I thought I'd creep back into the review game, starting with some spooky Christmas tales! Let's dive right in ^^
I love how you have turned Mariah Carey into a Christmas Cryptid XDD It's a hilarious and very fitting parody, given just how much I have heard her songs this year—even after Christmas has passed lol And my favorite aspect of this specifically would be imagining this:
Yesss, fight the Christmas hypnosis with Halloween magic!! >:D
Overall, that was a short yet very enjoyable little tale! Nicely done!
"They who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night."
"Words have no power to impress the mind without the exquisite horror of their reality.”
"I would define, in brief, the poetry of words as the rhythmical creation of Beauty."
yayyy I%u2019m glad you liked it!
Heya! Another great work! The suspense is strong, and the stakes are high. The narrator is being chased down by Mariah Carey, and we don't know if they'll be able to escape this time, especially after angering her with their attempt to fight back. One thing I might point out is that you italicize "if", when I feel like the tone would italicize the "is" a few words after, but that's just one thing, and mostly opinion. I like the added lore that it seems like she may only appear at christmas oriented events/places, not just during christmas, and maybe the narrator doesn't realize this? all in all, great work! keep writing! scary creepidays!
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