kitrosemon13

I'm not a total fan of Haiku's but I liked one in particular. Rushing Water Rivers wind through hills Rushing water 'round the bends Twisting and turning I liked this ...

Then comes the faultless one, His countenance like the sun's warm glow. He is willing to pay the price For the fields of weeds you sow. Will you accept the ...

The thing I love about poetry is that it tells a story. It could be either a sad or happy, a beautiful to horrid, ect. Your poem had beauty in ...

Welcome to YWS, river! I'll be your reviewer for today (: First of all we'll have to work on your use of punctuation and capitalization. You don't need to capitalize ...

Nicely written. First off first, I refuse to read what others have posted on ANYONE'S work so if you read something that someone else put, sorry! (: Let's start with ...

Wow, first is first. Congrats on making this the almost best piece of work I've read. This had so much imagery, I felt like I was there in your dream. ...

Nicely written, I did feel the pain that you are portraying as I read through this. I wrote a poem semi close to this so I know what you're going ...

Hello there, I hardly ever look at anyone else's reviews on anyone's work so forgive me if I'm repeating what they say. (: Now for the overall body of your ...

This was cute, I liked it. It was down to the point, the whole poem though did seem to lack something important. I get the idea of love, but I ...

First of all I'm sorry for your loss. I lost someone very dear to me and I too was in love with him. This poems had so many emotions and ...

Hello! I'm be reviewing your work today. (: One of the things I love about poems is that they have meaning. Yours did have meaning but I felt you expressed ...

First and formost; WELCOME TO YWS! It's a blast here. A few pointers here, just skim over this to see what corrections I made to your poem. (: Lying on ...

This poem is beautiful, it flows nicely but I think it doesn't have to much imagery as I was imagining it would have. Though that is not always a problem ...

Well, to tell you the truth this poem didn't give me much to work with. The title says it 'That was how he died' you didn't go into much detail ...

I didn't look at any other comments posted above me because I want to see your mistakes first hand. So if someone already told you this, SORRY! (: Well here ...