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Hey. I thought this was great. I understood what you were saying, and felt what you were trying to put across. I thought the idea of holding on was great, ...

Hey. Welcome to YWS. Always good to seen new work. I really like this poem. I thought it was meaningful, but a little cliche. The only problem I have with ...

Hey. I thought that this was really good. I thought it was written in a good perspective as a younger child. What I really liked was the ending. It was ...

Hey Day. I guess you were right. It wasn't the most exiting or thrilling chapter I've read, but its better than a lot of stuff. I did pick up a ...

Hey. I thought that this was good. The imagery is good, and I can see what you are trying to say. I only really have two things to say about ...

Hey. I thought that this was really good. I thought that it flowed well and that it worked well. I think that if you expand a little on your second ...

Hey. This is a good poem. I used to write poems like this. I found that they say more than you let on. I like the idea of the road ...

Hey. I thought this was really good. I felt it had deep emotion in it, and that I knew what you were saying. I only have one critique, and that ...

Hey. This is a great poem. I really understood what you were saying. It was a very powerful piece. On more of the structure side of things, I thought that ...

Hey. Welcome to YWS. I thought this poem was a good try for a first post. It had a good idea to the poem, and you also had a good ...

Hey. I thought that this was good. I like the idea of being free, but not just in the normal sense of walking around and living in one place. But ...

Hey. I thought this was really good. I thought it was descriptive, and gave a lot of imagery. But I think you do need to cut down on the length ...

Hey. It thought it was a good first effort. Unlike most people (or just people that I have seen) you had structure to your first post. That is always good. ...

Hey. I think that this poem is great. First off, I have to say that the idea of 'I am a dreamer' or 'I am in a dream world' is ...

Hey. I liked this poem. I thought it was well written, and had a pretty good rhythm to it. I think it had a good meaning to it, and I ...