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Hey. To start off, the idea to me was very cliche, and have had that said to my work a lot as well. But each person had a different way ...

Hey. I really liked what you tried to do with this poem. I found that it took me also a couple of lines to get into it. But when I ...

Hey. I thought this was really good. It had a great rhythm and rhyme to it, and flowed really well. Well, I thought this after I got through the first ...

Hey. First off, I don't usually review short stories, but here I am again. I thought that this was really good. I thought it was descriptive and had a good ...

Hey Scar. I thought this was really good. I found it flowed really well, and the rhyming scheme was strong. But I thought the rhythm in the last stanza was ...

Hey. I thought that you might have lead a different direction with the idea, but I liked what you did. The only real thing that I have a problem with, ...

Hey. I don't usually review stories and/novels, but here I am. I thought that this was great. It was well written and you left me hanging in suspence. Because of ...

Hey. Welcome to YWS. I thought that this was great. It was powerful and the message was clear. I thought it had a very good flow, which doesn't happen much ...

Hey. I thought that this was really good. I thought it had a really good and consistent rhythm to it, and a more subtle rhyming that was really good and ...

Hey Coter. I have to say, (and possibly for the first time) I agree with Random. It did feel like this poem when nowhere. It also seemed a little edgy ...

Hey Will. I thought that this, let's just say, wasn't a bad poem. It had a good flow in it, but you seemed too reliant on the rhyming. The rhyming ...

Hey Fiction. This was interesting. It was creative and new, and not something you would normally find. I think you did well on it, but there was one problem I ...

Hey. I thought that this was great. It was well written, meaningful, and powerful. It flowed well, and the rhyming seemed natural and smooth. I thought it was really good, ...

Hey. I thought that this was a good attempt on an unusual poetry topic. I found that the part that seemed a little off was the middle. I'm not sure ...

Hey. I have tried haiku's before, and I think you did infinitely better than me. I found that they flowed well, and I don't know if they were supposed too, ...