kimmybee

Tbh, this just popped into my head. Usually I don't even attempt prose :/ I'll definitely be looking into your suggestions (which are great btw) and get to working on ...

Thank you! I'm not a prose person- except for reading :D- but this was in my head and I tried to put it down. Haha, the awkward speaking? *guilty as ...

Thank you! I'm not a prose person- except for reading :D- but this was in my head and I tried to put it down. Haha, the awkward speaking? *guilty as ...

I suppose having the idea in my head of what I want it to be, I dodnt bring it across that well :/ Basically, think of....a relationship, yeah! Now it's ...

Thanks for reading and your review. I tried to make it as mundane in words so the subject could be as ambiguous yet poignant as possible. I suppose it means ...

Thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it! :)

Also, I see you're new! Welcome to the family of writer's. Hope you stay on board. For a first piece this is more than commendable.

Are you being sarcastic?! :p *sorry...couldnt resist :3* Thank you

YES! Yes it is! It makes ME want to read it :D Thank you sooooo much Katie. This gives me hope :3 I am forever grateful

Thank you for doing that. I think maybe the title was too ambiguous. It was suppose to tie in with the very depressing-like atmosphere the narrator finds herself in. Her ...

Hey no problem. Thanks for reviewing. You said I had a good writing style style...well i didnt know I had one. So I'll just go try for better plots next ...

Yeah, as I wrote I felt the tenses battling! I guess I'm so used to past tense I decided to strangle the poetic voice.

Wow! I never imagined....This is why I like writing though, and hearing feed backs. I'm glad to know that you were able to connect with it. I was a bit ...

Sometimes you have to find at least a single reason to be here. Even if it is to spite those you don't want you around, 'You're not getting rid of ...

Feels that way an awful lot of time doesn't it? I know this isn't a review, but I felt compelled to comment. Keep it up. I empathize.