kimmybee

I agree that this would do well if it was separated into stanzas. Also about the typos. The point I want to get out though is that this is very ...

Hey there! I like the way you approached this poem. I like the title Open Ears. You might want to pay closer attention to typos. Maybe type in a word ...

I like this poem. I like how it was like (this is how I saw it) a self introduction to YWS but at the same time a story. You are ...

I think this is a really nice story. This is my first reviewing a story, but the most evident flaw that I saw was the grammar use. I'll try not ...

GREAT JOB! :') I love the feel of serenity one gets from reading it. You could read it many times and the feeling would only grow. Put it on a ...

Simply amazing! I agree that this poem can be liken to a torch- we are the new generation of poets. A pretty exemplary poem if you ask me- a good ...

I believe the idea of the mirror's worth and the jewelries that everyone want or price is an exceptional one. I was however disappointed with how it was brought across ...

Haha! I loved this! This was very interesting to read :D Some things I noted: With each different section you managed to evoke a different reason in the reader and ...

Your poem seems a bit like a sketch. There's so much to it that I feel you wanted to express, but somewhere between your thoughts and the paper some imagery ...