Published March 17, 2012
With words unspoken
I'm not who I used to be
You words seem to drag me
They always linger in my mind
and taunt me because I know them
Indeed I know them all to well
Stupid ! Liar ! Failure !
These words follow me
Everywhere I go
There is no escape
Everywhere I am I hear
Lazy ! Crazy! Loner !
GET OUT OF MY HEAD !
I'm more than what you see
One day I'll will prove to the world
Your all wrong, You don’t know me
There is more to me than living
I just haven't found my place yet
because I listen with open ears
Of your taunting words
Telling me I don’t belong
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Hey there! I like the way you approached this poem.
I like the title Open Ears.
You might want to pay closer attention to typos. Maybe type in a word document and then cut and paste here.
Also, punctuation wouldn't take away from the piece.
A read really, keep writing