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Re: A Letter to the World
Hint hint Sniok, not to be rude, but its called A Letter to the World. It's supposed to read like that.
May 2, 2011 -
Re: The Identity Crisis
you as your own person is important in every single way this line is ment to say "is" not "are" because it's not talking about a person its saying your ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: When life s***s on you with bricks
this is an amazing poem! it reminds me a little bit of humpty dumpty, only a bit more dramatic. i love the rhyme scheme as well, it really makes the ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Arachnid
aw i love this poem! i absolutely hate spiders they creep me out. i do like the one leg to touch (and so on) part in the beginning i think ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: I'm Not Like Those Who Hurt You
i totally love this poem!!! it reminds me a lot of me and my boyfriend. it also reminds me of a song. Keep writing amazing stuff like this!!
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Monster in the Night
you know, writingfromtheheart, just because somebody likes vampires and thinks they're cool doesnt mean they are obssesed with the twilight books. i really really hate those books and i don't ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Spring
this poem is awesome! it makes me miss spring my school has already had 7 snow days from all the snow we've gotten :(
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Geeks
sorry i forgot to put this on my last post, but i think with a little tweaking, your poem could be amazing! it seems like you're a really good writer, ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: My Inspiration
i really like this poem, however i think it could be longer, and not so rhymey. I think a little bit of rhyming in this poem is really good, but ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: I Fell Into the Fire
i really like your poem,,, but i don't really think the title goes with it. i mean, maybe in the beginning, but after it kind of goes astray. as for ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: On Metamorphosis
i like this poem, it reminds me of the book The Metamorphosis by Franz Kafka we just finished reading in my english class. i really like the concept you have ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: No. 4
wow this is a really great poem :) i like how practically every line has a simile in it. it's a really good poem you're an awesome writer
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Self-Actualization
this is a very sad poem. i like it overall, but some of the lines don't flow very well, particularly at the beginning. maybe it's just the way im reading ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: An Ode To Mathematics
i absolutely love your poem i feel the same way about math
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: The meaning of being Pretty
i really love your poem you're an awesome writer :)
Mar 9, 2011