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Emalily wrote:I like the idea of the song, but I think you could make it better. I don't like the line AsxLoversxGo wrote: Now you’re six feet in the ground/ ...

Crimsona wrote: This is a very sweet poem that would definately deserve its place in someones love letter, but it's a little cliche and I have heard pretty similer poems ...

Hello, I liked the "How The Pen Fell". Anyway, I think most of it is kind of good. Will just keep writing to write even better. Keep writing, Alicia.

Hello and welcome to the Young Writers Society! How did you found this website? And do you enjoyed staying at this site? Here's a little that I want to review. ...

DanneilleLoveSong wrote: That was a really good poem. I normally don't care for really short poems but I really liked this. It short, sweet, and to the point. You did ...

Hey there, I got a suggestion for you, why don't you make the font that you're using a bit bigger? It's kind of hard to read it. Good luck, Kiki.

Oh I just love it. I wish I could hear it been sung. I like this part. Heres what i forgot to mention. because it's not yours to care, you ...

Hey there, I don't know much about the legend, but I love this poem. A curse, I think it's good. Nice write but there is no true flow to the ...

I just love it! It really touch my heart. You definately have the talent to write. Keep writing because everyone likes your writing. Good luck and keep writing, Alicia.

SofiaDesu wrote:I just noticed that you are 13. Then it is very, very good for your age. I would say, it is exellent. I would never say that it was ...

Hello! I like your haiku. And I love art. Bend and curve like warped in space I love this part. The grass grows green to I think there's something missing ...

Hello Chynelk5, I know how it feels like to be emo and I like it. I no longer want to notice . I think it's better if you write want ...

Hello Dreams, Your tittle is really simple. So I decide to read it. Your poem flows really well. I can see fear and I can see fate I think you ...

ZLYF wrote:is this supposed to rhyme? feels like there something wrong with the way it joins XD abba315 wrote: How far would I go for you? Maybe I’ve become immune ...

Hello, this is funny. I enjoyed reading it. This can be a joke and write more. You have to believe that you can write because you can. Good luck and ...