You.

by jemjive

Published November 2, 2010

In Poems

I love you so deeply
I love you so much,
I love the sound of your voice
and the feel of your touch.
I love your warm smile,
your kind thoughtful way,
the joy that you bring
to my life everyday.
I love you today
as I have from the start,
I'll love you forever
with all of my heart.

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GummyBearEater
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GummyBearEater commented Comment · Nov 6, 2010

Sweet man....
its like you're so in love with someone....
Sweet...

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Mangapirate commented Comment · Nov 4, 2010

This is a cute poem. Made me say "aw". I liked it. Keep up the good work.

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rememberme
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rememberme commented Comment · Nov 4, 2010

this is soooooooooo sweet, someones awfully lucky and whoever you wrote it for you must love them alot(: i loooove it

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kikialicia31
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kikialicia31 wrote a review Review · Nov 4, 2010

Crimsona wrote: This is a very sweet poem that would definately deserve its place in someones love letter, but it's a little cliche and I have heard pretty similer poems before. Maybe if you make it more unique by changing some of the wording and adding some metephors it would be even better.

Keep writing,

Crim


I agree with Crim. It's pretty similar poems before. I think you should make it more unique by adding some metephors and changing some of the wording.
Anyway, It's a very sweet poem.

Keep writing,

Alicia.

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Quackermoo commented Comment · Nov 4, 2010

I enjoy the feeling behind the words.
It's great(:

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colie18
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colie18 commented Comment · Nov 4, 2010

I like it the way its written and everything, but I feel like I have heard it before, its like some others I have read before.

But keep writing

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Crimsona
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Crimsona wrote a review Review · Nov 3, 2010

This is a very sweet poem that would definately deserve its place in someones love letter, but it's a little cliche and I have heard pretty similer poems before. Maybe if you make it more unique by changing some of the wording and adding some metephors it would be even better.

Keep writing,

Crim



In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien