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Hi there! Just wanted to say a few things and help get this out of the Green Room! First off, I think the way this is formatted drew away from ...

Okay, I need to get this out of the Green Room, so here's a quickie review for ya. First off, twists on the Four Horsemen are fun, so I'm intrigued ...

Hi there! Thanks for requesting a review, and I hope this helps! Also, welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. There are a few topics I want to ...

Hi Fishr! Thanks for requesting a review, and I hope this helps! For starters, I'm curious as to who said the opening paragraph. The rest of this story I assume ...

Hey Pompadour! Popping in for a (not-so) quick review, but oh well! First Thoughts: To start off, this is an interesting start to this story! Kashmala has a unique voice ...

Hey there! Every work deserves a review, so I figured I'd give you one on this chapter of yours :) First off, I'm a little confused by how many characters ...

Hi there! Just wanted to get this out of the Green Room. For starters, having a twist on angels and demons is a neat premise. I'm curious as to where ...

Hi Omnom! You've got me actually reviewing, wow. I like how you've written Wong. He seems to be like a pretty straight-forward guy, and that's cool of him to try ...

Hey there! I just wanted to give you a few notes on this work of yours. I went back and read Eleven Days as well, since I was curious as ...

Hey Lightsong! I'm so sorry this review took this long and it's a pretty quick one so I don't know how helpful this'll be. So, I'm intrigued by the way ...

Hey Lightsong! I'm very happy to see the second part of this, and I hope you keep the updates coming! First off, this chapter is intriguing because I keep trying ...

Hey Lightsong! I have yet to read the first draft of this short story, but I do like the title of either version. And this is definitely interesting! To begin ...

Hey Lightsong! To start with, I think this is a neatly done work! The connection between the Daniel and Ada is interesting and I'd like to see a little more ...

Hey Silver! Alrighty. This chapter was interesting! I kind of like that the spy doesn’t have a name. That makes it so much more mysterious especially since I barely know ...

Hey Silver! Let's see. Honestly, my first thought was "woah, that guy's a hawk." XD. I'm very late to the game, huh? One thing I'd like to discuss is the ...