keystrings

Hi! I have reviewed a couple of your stories before, so I thought I would add on and give some brief feedback on this one. I really like Shirley's tone ...

Hi there! I find it very interesting to think about two generations — with the main character now and her friends/acquaintances in Hell as well as her mother and another ...

Hi there! Thanks so much for requesting a review : ) I like the opening line because we are getting a good perspective on what our main character is feeling ...

Hey there! Thank you so much for requesting a review. I'll try to stick to at least one review per week. Feel free to tag me when you publish the ...

Hello there! Thank you so much for requesting a review c: I'll be centering this review around each of the three stanzas to work through how the lines work together ...

Hi there! I'm keystrings and I am happy to review your work today. I noticed a couple of later chapters in the Green Room, so I wanted to be able ...

Hi there! I read quickly the previous story of Percy so that I had a better understanding of Percy and his circumstances. I understand that a lot of these characters ...

Hi there! As a disclaimer, I have not read any of the previous sections of this story, but with a more sensitive topic, I wanted to still give you some ...

Sometimes simplicity works so nicely to establish this kind of longing, something that can be universally understood by anyone that has ever missed another person. I love it. I am ...

Hello again! It feels like it's been forever. ^^ I like that we get a glimpse back in Isaac's mind. Since he feels like our most straightforward protagonist (judging by ...

Hey there! Age is such an interesting thing -- it carries cold facts but everyone reacts to the addition of years in different ways, compared to however their circumstances are. ...

Interesting. I find the title unique for it doesn’t not only keep the “title” perhaps as the end of February — but this was posted on the first of March ...

Hello there! /`.`/ I am here to start reading this story again I know you've been pinging me for the new chapters, but I figured I should head back to ...

Hello! /`*`/ I am here to review. There are a quite a lot of reviews here, so I won't leave too much feedback, but I definitely want to get started ...

Hello there, I wanted to help with getting this work out of the Green Room, and to hopefully give a useful review. There are two main things I want to ...