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Sorry for adding to that then, always happy to give reviews. No reason to feel annoyed though, nobody is perfect, and everyone makes mistakes. :)

Well it seemed like the boy turned into the older guy who cursed him, but that could have been because this is the first chapter I had read.

Thank you very much, and I'm always happy to review for people. I always review things I get a notification for as soon as I see the notification :)

I had to explain a lot of the weapons simply because a stasis bomb kind of requires some explanation. Yes he created them, on top of the unlimited physical strength ...

Kevin Megan Hitomi Yukio are all based on real people, the rest are made up. So I matched those 4 with the personality of the person they are based off ...

Your welcome, always happy to give reviews and follow people who write stories I like.

It's funny you should mention it coming out like a movie, I picture it with a movie type vibe when I started writing this story.

Zero awesome profile picture :)

Kevin is based on me, I was always a bit of a nerd. His being a bookworm shows more in later chapters and when making plans or strategies.

I didn't much either. I didn't eat lunch my 4 years of high school. I only ate dinner, and a snack while I studied that was it.

As much as it can to someone who has never read that story, although I knew the general plot of jack the ripper.

I hope that misunderstanding wasn't because I started on this one, but its just what I read that made it seem that way.

Local forests that to large to be a simple city park. Often with fishing places, camping, local girls scout and boy scout lodges for that time of year. They also ...

I figured that was to easy for an ending. I don't publish before review day, so I can avoid any rush but that's just me.

Your welcome