kevin25a

Your welcome, yeah my mother was the shitty parent for me to. But I ran away and lived on my own at a really young age.

Yeah, but it is a story, so anything is possible. Personally I loved the story, and just wanted to point them out. I didn't have a problem with them, I ...

I wasn't saying it was wrong, I liked how it was written. I do the same, but I write 5 chapters of my stories in a sitting, I like quick ...

Your welcome :)

Your welcome, it was good. :)

For the first part you quoted I think you missed the point. Having the authority to do it or not is irrelevant, with enough governments to agree they would have ...

Your welcome, this site can be confusing at first. I'm always willing to help and or answer questions when I can.

This was really good, I really like this story. I am still a huge fan and I look forward to your next chapters. It felt shorter somehow, not sure why.

Each experience is different, you can't get it wrong. The most inspiring life stories have the darkest beginnings.

Yeah that happens, the more chapters you write the longer they get. I noticed that early after joining here. I couldn't go under 1000 words past my fourth or fifth ...

Yeah that happens, the more chapters you write the longer they get. I noticed that early after joining here. I couldn't go under 1000 words past my fourth or fifth ...

Weird, it's one of two accents I adore. French and British, sadly it's a language I have no talent for. It's a great language, but I failed to be able ...

That's a good point, what is your first if you don't mind me asking?

Honestly the story would barf awesome sauce. I'm going to make a top 10 list of my favorite stories on YWS when I get my computer back, but for now ...

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I agree with the comment before me. Personally this is a perfect happily ever after way to end it. But the anime fanboy in me would be outraged by such ...