kevin25a

This was a good story, it had a good meaning behind it. The light also made a good point, you have to understand something to fix it. Creative names too ...

God of probability, that's a new one. I doubt anyone would have used it before. I really liked this story, I saw no problems with it personally, or areas I ...

This was really good, I look forward to your next chapters, although I have to say cigarettes are much better than cigars. They burn faster sure, but the lingering taste ...

So the "it" he or she heard was a voice in his or her head. That's the first and biggest problem with your story, you didn't say if the main ...

This was really good, hopefully it's a short story you do chapters for. Pretty sure I saw a movie like that once, where the fog killed anyone it touched and ...

This was really good, no significant problem to mention. Not normally my kind of thriller, I normally prefer the more creepy gruesome thrillers. But this was really good, I look ...

This was awesome, I definitely look forward to your next chapter. You did a perfect job of describing things, not to much or to little. Created a perfect setting most ...

I will start by saying I liked it. It was very confusing at times, but was good despite that. I think with a little work it could be a lot ...

I loved the story, I'm looking forward to the next chapters. I love the interrupting in bold font. It's a funny and unique thing to do. To answer your confusion ...

This was a really good story, but had a bunch of problems I noticed. Not grammar, punctuation, or anything like that. A handful of times it felt like you just ...

I loved this story, I'm confused as to the agent comment. Do you mean like CIA or MI6 RSF type agent? Or like secret service, seals, that aspect confused the ...

This is a really good story, I'm not usually a fan of this kind of story but I liked it. I'm looking forward to where you will take it. It ...

It was a really good story I look forward to following. It almost feels like you're writing about yourself, I'm getting that vibe anyways. I hope you continue the story, ...

Nurse Joy, brings back memories of pokemon when it wasn't complete like it has been since the second region was invented. This was a really good story, with a great ...

I loved the story, I'm looking forward to a chapter two. You have a good thing going here, I look forward to where you take it. Sci-fi is my favorite ...