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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I was dead

    Thank You :)

    Jan 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, General Re: Mixed Emotions

    I didnt see how it was sexist towards guys, Because for one, i was only talking about one guy and then started talking about how immature guys are and thats ...

    Jan 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Silly Me

    Oh my gosh , !!!!! If there was a million like buttons i'd push it, i can completely relate to this, this is what i was going through last year ...

    Jan 17, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: About me

    Thank you so much :), And i will defianatly take you up on that challenge . This really meant alot

    Jan 17, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: long-winded

    This was amazing, i loved every word , and i hung on every image. I Love your writing i think i can learn alot from you.

    Jan 17, 2013
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Lyrical Re: Not meant to be

    I really, liked how you had the chorus :) . This is amazing, i can completely understand every word. -This really inspired me not to let anyone bring me down ...

    Jan 15, 2013
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: love

    Hey, so im new on here and i did a poem similar to the way your's is set up. Try a different format like Love is natural Gradually is becomes ...

    Jan 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Loosing It

    Thank you , i love the critisim it's helping me alot, and yes i read yours, (The Calm) I absolutely loved it.

    Jan 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Loosing It

    Thank you for your honesty, i will for sure , work on that

    Jan 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Loosing It

    Thank you, and yes i will defiantely work on that :)

    Jan 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Calm

    This had a nice flow, nice transition to it, every word i hung on a piece a thread i didnt want there to be an end. But I exspecially Loved ...

    Jan 14, 2013


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