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Re: I was dead
Thank You :)
Jan 18, 2013 -
Re: Mixed Emotions
I didnt see how it was sexist towards guys, Because for one, i was only talking about one guy and then started talking about how immature guys are and thats ...
Jan 17, 2013 -
Re: Silly Me
Oh my gosh , !!!!! If there was a million like buttons i'd push it, i can completely relate to this, this is what i was going through last year ...
Jan 17, 2013 -
Re: About me
Thank you so much :), And i will defianatly take you up on that challenge . This really meant alot
Jan 17, 2013 -
Re: long-winded
This was amazing, i loved every word , and i hung on every image. I Love your writing i think i can learn alot from you.
Jan 17, 2013 -
Re: Not meant to be
I really, liked how you had the chorus :) . This is amazing, i can completely understand every word. -This really inspired me not to let anyone bring me down ...
Jan 15, 2013 -
Re: love
Hey, so im new on here and i did a poem similar to the way your's is set up. Try a different format like Love is natural Gradually is becomes ...
Jan 15, 2013 -
Re: Loosing It
Thank you , i love the critisim it's helping me alot, and yes i read yours, (The Calm) I absolutely loved it.
Jan 14, 2013 -
Re: Loosing It
Thank you for your honesty, i will for sure , work on that
Jan 14, 2013 -
Re: Loosing It
Thank you, and yes i will defiantely work on that :)
Jan 14, 2013 -
Re: The Calm
This had a nice flow, nice transition to it, every word i hung on a piece a thread i didnt want there to be an end. But I exspecially Loved ...
Jan 14, 2013
