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Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (1)
Hello there! I can't believe Harryhardy beat me to this, but I've been planning to review your work (I'm just really slow). I'm also not fond of the last part ...
Jul 7, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1 - I'm Thinking
Hello there! Thank you for approaching me through Katteelog :D I know this is a massive delay since I promised that I'd do it as early as possible. I'm so ...
Jul 2, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 0 - A Preface Before You Read!
Hello there! I'm just dropping by before posting your requested review for chapter 1 (in a few hours). I know prologues don't really need reviews because they're mainly descriptions of ...
Jun 28, 2020 -
Re: Dreamer | A Poem
Hello there, F.lockers! I'm no fairy godmother but I saw you requesting for a review so wish granted :D Here's my Bibbidi-Bobbidi-Boo of critique: Let me point out the positives ...
Jun 26, 2020 -
Re: Abernathy's House of Magic: Chapter 1
Hello there! Thank you so much for approaching me through Katteelog! First off, from the start to finish--plot wise --you've got me anchored on my seat. I'd like to start ...
Jun 25, 2020 -
Re: The caesura of broken lines
Hello there! First up, I am incredibly sorry for the delay. It was difficult to reanalyse your poem when I've already interpreted it. Also, thank you for approaching me through ...
Jun 8, 2020 -
Re: Slave Girl: Chapter 2.2
Hello, Shade! I've read something that has a similar plot to this, but don't worry, no story can be completely different. In fact, it's what makes it mundane. What's important ...
Jun 6, 2020 -
Re: what to write?
Hello Libs! Big thanks for approaching me through Katteelog! First and foremost, it's great that you've chosen a topic that many writers can see themselves in. However, the biggest risk ...
Jun 2, 2020 -
Re: Pain For The Game
So hello there! Thanks for approaching me through Katteelog :) I'm going to start with the positives. You're consistent with the point of view and the tenses. The plot also ...
Jun 1, 2020 -
Re: Gears
Hello there Starlit! First thing I'll say would be that your title is already great for the poem. It defines a part of a robot that humans perceive as the ...
May 31, 2020 -
Re: A Collection Of My NaPo 2020 Poems
Hello there! I like your poem during the creatively titled poetry by the way. Now, I'll be reviewing two of your poems in here: Difference and Friendship Difference Great job ...
May 31, 2020 -
Re: par for the course
Hello Mage! The sarcasm is dropping off atomic bombs in this poem. We can take a rain check on an appointment with Einstein if we have you. This poem is ...
May 31, 2020 -
Re: War
Hello there! I like the formatting: a shape of a sword or perhaps a dagger as well as the rhyme scheme. However, they seem to compromise essential parts of writing ...
May 31, 2020 -
Re: Do You Ever?
Hello there! I was wondering why your username was so familiar and then I realized that you were the one who wrote "New Normals." So hello again, I'm back :) ...
May 31, 2020 -
Re: DIVERSIFICATION (A theme reinforced by Covid-19)
Hello there! It's an extremely political poem that points out the impediments of economic growth. It's a very interesting and informative read. I'm going to start off with the minor ...
May 31, 2020
