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First, you need paragraphs. Maybe you just didn't seperate them from your text but it makes it easier to review. Ok...*Kathy cracks knuckles and continues with her review.... :D Be ...

He yawned, took a sip of his (supposed to be bitter but always ends up too sweet to stomach) drink, set down the mug, and started to read. The parts ...

I saw a couple of grammar errors. Here goes my review! Hope this helps! no idea what there going to say Don't forget the different words that sound alike! This ...

Just my 2 cents.. megsug - Believe me, (I don't know if you're Male or Female) but if you're ever pregnant one of these days - trust me - you ...

Very good piece! I hope to read more soon! Keep me informed and I'll comment on more! :) I have a problem pronouncing strange names but that's just me. You ...

This could be a very cool song! you did a great job on this and i love the rhyming. Very nice. Unfortunately, I don't have any negative comments for you ...

I saw a couple of grammatical errors. heart new the way our relationship worked. This was how we killed each other emotionely. This was not the first time Maybe reword ...

Unlike the word who gives out pain so cruelly I had to slow down reading the poem to read this line. It seemed kind of long and took the flow ...

“Stay there” I sprinted down to Ghost hoping that he was still alive. Your friend needs to have "Stay there," I yelled as I sprinted down to Ghost hoping he ...

I really love the writing style and can't wait 'til I have time to read more of your writings you already have posted. It is well written except the grammar ...

Here's what I saw as I read: Noah lay in his bed, staring up at the ceiling. His clock said 5am, his eyes were wide Is his clock on the ...

Pretty good story. I htink you could make this into a novel. The only thing I see is that it reminds me of Hannah Montana. Any relation? Was it inspired ...

I want to see more of this storyline! It is interesting. Some points are confusing that M&C pointed out, but I see great potential. I want to see more and ...

I really like this poem. I didn't notice any major grammar mistakes, but honestly didn't go back to look and check the grammar. I'm not the greatest at grammar checking. ...

I'm more of a story person and not great at poetry but wanted to say my opinion for review. I enjoyed this poem. It is to the point and I ...