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Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever
This is simply awesome, dude. :p Yes, like what some had said, I also thought this was going to be one annoying short. I was wrong. :D The Unawesomely-Dressed Woman ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Room 209
This is such a sad story. Sad but beautiful. I love it. It had me crying by the near end of the story. I won't make any corrections on the ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: The Yellow Sheets
This is simply amazing. Shorts without dialogues usually bore me, but your work totally made me sit up straight on my chair and read the piece like it would be ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Through the Storm
Hey there! Okay, I have to say I LOVE IT. It almost made me cry, especially when Katherine read the vows. Awwwww. And one more thing, my name's Katherine, so, ...
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: Percy Jackson and The Olmpians by Rick Riodran
Rick Riordan is a genius!!! I can't wait for the second book of The Heroes series. I LOVE PERCY!!!!!!! Gosh. Am I crazy? Haha. And Nico's so cute. Ugh. I ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Books you loved more than the movie...
Percy Jackson and The Olympians : The Lightning Thief. I REALLY LOVE THE BOOKS and Rick Riordan is a genius. I was pretty disappointed when the movie was totally different. ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
I don't read bad books because they just make my head ache. But I have read one: Sideways Stories from Wayside School. IDK but it makes me dumb I don't ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: I know you.
HWOW! I know a lot had already said this, but I'm going to say it all over again anyway. I.LOVE.THIS and I COULD RELATE TO THIS TOO, making me love ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Crush
Hm. I don't know about this. But it does have a potential. I love the thought of the MC being sad and angry because she thought her crush doesn't like ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: The dog that never left his owner
Hello there! XD This was pretty nice. It reminds me of the Japanese story about a dog named 'Hachiko'. There even is a movie on that now. Very much the ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: That Awkward Moment
Hey there! I won't go into the grammar nitpicking in this one. :) I like it! It's really realistic for me. Cute. The last line was the best. I had ...
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: You Stole Who I Am
I think it seems more lyrical. Anyway, it does have some potential. I don't think I have to nitpick the grammar, though. I just can't seem to understand this piece ...
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: Peanut Butter
HAHA. I liked it. Like what others said, I liked it up to the part when the boy said, "You're beautiful." After was too fast. I mean, who would want ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
He whirled around, looking directly at me and my tear stained face. He stepped up to me unsure what to do.. I punched his toned chest before falling into his ...
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: Hard Breakup
Wow. I certainly like this poem. :) Trying to make it rhyme didn't make this poem sound odd. This is good. :) Keep writing. Congratulations, by the way, for making ...
Aug 13, 2010
