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Re: Room 53
I have to admit,this is an incredible story giving insight to the human mind, the sorrow of one to do work that though he had himself done, was also much ...
May 31, 2013 -
Re: Sloth
Oh, a good story makes my bones tremble! I loved the first one, but this one is so impressive! I love the idea, and the entire gist of it. It ...
Apr 14, 2013 -
Re: The Abyss
Oh,such a delicious poem! Hi, Im kameron and Ill do my best to review ;) First off, Ill start off with the fact I adore the poem. It is a ...
Apr 10, 2013 -
Re: The Spark
Hello! Kameron, and I'll do my best to work with what you have because it is a good piece but maybe a tad confusing at first? Well, I do admit ...
Apr 6, 2013 -
Re: One True Friend
Wow...first off let me say this is an extremely good poem! I love it! I am Kameron, and I'll give the best review I can ;D first off, the entire ...
Apr 4, 2013 -
Re: Etiquette
Hello! Kameron here, and I will start and be happy to give it the first review! To start off, there is definitely not a whole lot to work with, but ...
Apr 4, 2013 -
Re: The Angel of Death
Oh,what an insane piece! I love it! It could blossom into a story that could rip someone heart out! I would seriously love to read more! However,there do seem to ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Lust
Oh,what a divine piece of work! Considering my severe mood changes as of now, this just gives my sorrow and push into insanity! I love it! Jack the Ripper is ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: The Voice
wow....I really enjoyed this piece! I'll start with the good things, like the entire idea. the voices, the pain that doesn't seem to be acknowledged but is rushing beneath the ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: My Life's Worth
Interesting piece! I personally liked it, what with the little romance entwined and the biggest thing in it really. Of course, nothing is perfect and yours is no exception but ...
Mar 28, 2013 -
Re: From Hell We Crawl.
Interesting poem! I love the idea, and I do personally believe we are coming to an end but this is so perfect. Maybe go into mote detail of the demons, ...
Mar 19, 2013 -
Re: A Rapist's Note.
Oh wow, do I love a good and gruesome story? :D It is written perfectly and I love the character, the way everything is worded and just the utter perfection ...
Mar 18, 2013 -
Re: Bed of Roses
This is,without a doubt, a poem that has little to no need for review and of course I can find nothing wrong with it. I love the way you describe ...
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: Innocent Criminals
Hi :) Well,first off I do enjoy your poem, because it does express mixed feelings and confusion that a person is feel. The words are nice though some could be ...
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: The Ancient Blood Chapter 1
Hi ;) Well,first off I must say that I do love the story, and the way you describe such things. There is so much potential you pour into this story ...
Mar 5, 2013
