Young Writers Society

I read a lot of poems on this sit really really fast, but yours for some reason forced me to slow down and really focus on what you're saying. I'm still not quite sure what you're saying, but I like the mood of it and I think this is a piece where you don't have to know what you're saying, because it wouldn't quite make sense anyway.
This poem reminds me of the insignificance of the entire human race. I understand that you're talking about space and how amazingly infinite it is, and I think you did a really good job! Your writing style is evident and your words flow smoothly.
I definitely like your topic and how you described it. You did really well.
Keep writing! I'm sorry if this review made no sense, But I really have nothing but praise to offer you on this poem.

-fortis Fortitude

I'm a big fan of your choice of topic and his poem brings to mind the concept of a mirror facing another mirror, constantly dividing by half.

And great job with rhyme scheme! I particularly like the sound of the last 2 lines, but my favorite imagery is in line 1-3.

Oh,such a delicious poem! Hi, Im kameron and Ill do my best to review

First off, Ill start off with the fact I adore the poem. It is a very very good piece and it captured my attention and made me really think to understand it right from the start.I loved the words and the vocabulary and I doubt there are any spelling mistakes, if there are I saw none

OK, now onto the other things. I love the poem, yes, but it could be made longer. The story could be strung out and show the true depths inside the mind of people, of mankind and show the darkest corners and lightest fronts. I think that it really could show that people have their evils and their lighter side. I think you can express what hides in the minds of those who let the evil consume them, and those who let themselves float into the better side of themselves. It would make everything a little less short though the current length makes one think, imagine a longer one more in depth. It lets the reader see into themselves, yes?

Other then that ,I dont think there needs to be much else improved. I loved the piece and wouldnt mind reading more!!