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Re: My Soul Mate
This is a very nice poem you have here! I absolutely love the last line. It just really makes the poem. At first, I thought your flow was a bit ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Luna
I love your writing style! This is very well written. Poems like these make me eager to read the last line, eager for the last revelation. And this satisified me! ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: I wish
I can relate very very well. So first off, excellent job in explaining everything will such simplicity that I could relate. ;) Second off, I love the second stanza of ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Sin
Wowzers! I haven't read a poem this willing to talk about sin. And it is terrific! Very emotional without angrily pointing fingers to people. You put yourself in there. Like ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: bloated bites
Hey there. This is over my head but I can still admire its beauty. You are a truly talented writer. I'm not sure if this is what you were going ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Teddy Bear and His Used Heart
Well I absolutely hate it when someone TELLS you to cut something out so I won't do that. Especially because I don't want you to cut anything out or tell ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: The Doll is Waiting
The imagery was great but I also was confused about the message. But I'm confused about a lot of things so I wouldn't take it personal. ;) I would usually ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: **Haven't really thought of a title**
I can't tell you how much I love this! I really really really love it! It flows perfectly, amazingly, and seems effortless. I can completely relate. I really wish I ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Bumblebee's Journey
Very cute poem you have here. I really like it. I could picture everything. And it has great flow. I like how the last stanza is only two lines. It ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Removed by author
This is a really good poem. I like the format and it flows very nicely. And I could also relate. I think every young writer can relate to this in ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Perfection
Oh wow. This is really good. It sounds like the perfect idea for a novel. I'd pick up the book in a second if it was one. I love the ...
Jun 15, 2011
