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Yes, I know what you are talking about.Even though I don't actually live in Kashmir I know all about oppression and the struggle and want for freedom.I am glad you ...

Hey, I think I like both versions of the poems and the imagery is really good.The problem with the first poem is that you put your name in the end.I ...

I totally agree with you.You just wrote down what a lot of a us have been feeling lately.Not necessarily Arabs, but many others.Being a muslim doesn't automatically make a terrorist.So, ...

Hey, I don't know why you think it's not good...I think it's perfectly amazing! and the song has been a favorite of mine for a long time, so even after ...

Wow, This was really beautiful.I don't usually comment much but I had to tell you how good it is.On the basis of poetry I think this flowed really well.The emotions ...

Awww man! You had to name this "do not click".Now it was impossible to leave this alone.Anyway this was really cool.Unexpected, but good.Curiosity is human is our sense of discovery ...

This is a nice poem actually. I really liked the rhymes it seems to give a little bounce to the overall seemed to me more of a really fun and ...

Hi, Wow! This was a whole new point of view for me.I never thought what a leaf would feel...Out of the to poems The first seemed to display emotions better ...

I Absolutely Love it! Probably because I couldn't make sense of it :) Well the main idea wasn't understandable and to me it was just random and bizarre collection of ...

Nice work! I liked the was short and interesting.I liked the part about the constant battle with cold but when you think of cold you could add so much detail.The ...

Hi! This was hilarious! This is the first Harry Potter / Twilight parody I have read and I loved it! I don't think I need to mention the mistakes , ...

Hey! This poem was amazing! I was forced to reply to was beautiful from beginning to end.The language was simple but the meaning was so deep and elaborate.I can't criticize ...

Hi, I think it's a really good poem especially if its a first attempt.I love your imagery but the first stanza still lacks the flow that is more prominent in ...

Hi, This is a real amazing piece of work.It's strangely true by the way.I had so much fun reading it that I could really imagine a little kid in shorts ...

Hey, I like the word and the emotions are really good but I agree with lindsay it is a bit abstract.try and give it a central theme and maybe change ...