juliarosewood

Thank you so much for reviewing this.. :)

Thank youuu :)

Glad you liked it

Will sure read it!!!

Hey! So I just finished Chapter 2, and wow.... your world-building is seriously impressive. Everything in Va' Leria feels alive, from the healers and the weird fruits to how the ...

Okay, um… so first off, I just wanna say — wow. This poem really surprised me! Like, for a first piece, it’s really good. You’ve got such vivid imagery — ...

Thank you :)

Thanks for the review and thank you for sharing your perspective!! It's really a lott to me :D

Your words portray the imagery neatly and "muted skies" hits hard for me...I sometimes feel that the life is monotonous too....almost boring while doing the same thing over and over ...

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a really nice poem... especially the last lines

a really nice poem... especially the last lines

And about the visual appearance...I know it's the stereotypical description of a nerd...and I'm really sorry for not being creative on that part og inspiration was my friend, who's a ...

Thank you for reviewing this piece...I wrote this a long time i didn't notice those overly long lines which could be replaced by shorter and crisper ones...thank you for pointing ...